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[Game Chef '10][In English too!!] Brachininae

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Davide Losito - ( Khana ):
Hey Alex, don't take it as a stop.
Take it as a list of feedbacks you may use to improve your game.
You are not "out", you're just "not yet there". ^^
For the comments I see, the basic ideas look right; what Jonathan says is that you need to focus the game more on "something" that he couldn't grasp from your script.
Elaborate that, think about what YOU want the game to talk about and focus on that.

Look especially this

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Aside from journey, the ingredients here are mostly a stretch, which is fine, but I can’t help but think that maybe making the ingredients more central would give this game a stronger sense of purpose.

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I understand that your stretched the ingredients in the script, but maybe the game should deal with other themes. Now that the game is not competing in the Game Chaf anymore, find out which of those ingredients should be replaced with others that can show at first glance what your game is about.
I don't think the comments you received are bad, I think they are a nice point to start from to make the game better. :)

Mauro:
A link?

il mietitore:
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Well, certeanly points about the game were surely right, and i knew i had to work harder on them as soon as the Game Chef finished.

I admit that about the cookery note I am a bit surprised. Looking to other jobs, i see that many (the majority) used it more like litteral setting elements, without working on them very much, and i was a lot... convinced, about my Desert --> Apathy.

Anyway, as you say now I am more free to develop the game as I prefer. I have some idea I would like to work on. Let's see what happens.

Kevin:
Good luck Alex! I enjoyed the read and I look forward to the next version. Keep writing.

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